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I’ll choose gimbap.
It means make by gim and rice(bap) and diverse ingredients By making gimbap.
There are many kinds of gimbap.
I can make a gimbap that add as I like.
Then I’ll eat everyday different gimbap.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. It means make by gim and rice(bap) and diverse ingredients By making gimbap.
4. I can make a gimbap that add as I like.
5. Then I’ll eat everyday different gimbap.
Thank you for doing your homework! See you around!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I’ll choose gimbap.
>>CORRECT!
2. It means make by gim and rice(bap) and diverse ingredients By making gimbap.
>>It means making gim and rice(bap) using diverse ingredients.
3. There are many kinds of gimbap.
>>CORRECT!
4. I can make a gimbap that add as I like.
>>I can make gimbap and add ingredients as I like.
5. Then I’ll eat everyday different gimbap.
>>Then I’ll eat different gimbap every day.
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