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2024-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

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Hi Teacher Divina Thank you for giving me homework Homework What are your plans in the next five years? My answer I\'m going to live in Canada for 2 years and gain experiences. For 3 years , I will find out what I want to do and certificates . and I get certificates. I will prepare the sea police exam.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름] [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some corrections:

1. I\'m going to live in Canada for 2 years and gain experiences.

>>I\'m going to live in Canada for 2 years and gain some experiences.

2. For 3 years , I will find out what I want to do and certificates.

>>3 years after that, I will find out what I want to do and earn some certificates.

3. and I get certificates. I will prepare the sea police exam.

>>Once I get a lot of certificates, I will prepare for the sea police exam.

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