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Dear [Name].Sally, My dream is to travel all over the after retirement. I've achived this dream a little by traveling 25 countries. But, I've not been to Africa, Latin America & Middle East Asia. For this reason, I'm studying Spanish to use when my dream will come true. I'm not sure if it would be real. However I believe that it's possible if I would try it. Additionally, I've checked meaning of some words. I understand meaning of financial statement. It is a kind of table which shows conditions of company clearly.

Hello [이름]^^Thank you for sending your composition^^ I am pretty sure you will visit those places soon^^Good luck^^ T. Sally Dear [Name].Sally, >>>CORRECTMy dream is to travel all over the after retirement. >>My dream is to travel all over the world after my retirement.I\'ve achived this dream a little by traveling 25 countries. >>>I\'ve achieved this dream a little by traveling to 25 countries.But, I\'ve not been to Africa, Latin America & Middle East Asia. >>>CORRECT >>>Or I have not yet visited Africa, Latin America and Middle East Asia.For this reason, I\'m studying Spanish to use when my dream will come true. >>>For this reason, I\'m studying Spanish so I can use it when my dream will come true.I\'m not sure if it would be real. >>>CORRECTHowever I believe that it\'s possible if I would try it. >>>CORRECTAdditionally, I\'ve checked meaning of some words. >>>Additionally, I\'ve checked the meaning of some words.I understand meaning of financial statement.>>>I understand the meaning of financial statement.It is a kind of table which shows conditions of company clearly. >>>It is a kind of table which shows the financial conditions of company clearly.