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I think it’s about making healthy eating habits.
Many people exposed to processed foods and a lots of junk foods.
This bring about adversely affect in body.
So, we have to make effort lessen unhealthy foods.
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>>CORRECT!
Many people exposed to processed foods and a lots of junk foods.
Many people exposed to processed foods and a lots of junk foods.
>>Many people are exposed to processed foods and lots of junk foods.
This bring about adversely affect in body.
This bring about adversely affect in body.
>>This has adverse effects on our body.
So, we have to make effort lessen unhealthy foods.
So, we have to make effort lessen unhealthy foods.
>>So, we have to make an effort to lessen our consumption of unhealthy foods.
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