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I\'ve been tried snake\'s extract 2 years ago.
My husband said that was carp extract.
My mon fed rats meat to their children.
All of truths turned out after longtime.
But I know how much they love me.
They were not trying to decieve me.
It was a good memory to me.
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Ms. [이름]ny!
Having that kind of experience is exceptional and you just be happy about it.
Thank you for this!
Aki~
I\'ve been tried snake\'s extract 2 years ago.
>>> I have tried snake extract 2 years ago.
My husband said that was carp extract.
>>> My husband told me that it was a carp extract.
My mon fed rats meat to their children.
>>> My mom has tried feeding us rats\' meat.
All of truths turned out after longtime.
>>> We found out the truth after a long time.
But I know how much they love me.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> But we know that it is one way of showing their love.
They were not trying to decieve me.
>>> They were not trying to deceive me.
It was a good memory to me.
>>> It was a good memory for me.
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