Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I’m a follower of my favorite YouTuber now.
I like it now but I think I want to be a leader sometimes.
Because I envy them and look a cool.
I imaging myself filming and editing videos.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Great Writing! Thanks for making an effort to answer the question for the day! I wonder who your favorite Youtuber is! It must be a great content creator. See you later in class!
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
I like it now but I think I want to be a leader sometimes.
I like it now but I think I want to be a leader sometimes.
>>CORRECT!
Because I envy them and look a cool.
Because I envy them and look a cool.
>>It\'s because I envy them and they look so cool.
I imaging myself filming and editing videos.
I imaging myself filming and editing videos.
>>I imagine myself filming and editing videos.
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