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I miss a lot childhood my friends.
I ask to my friends hurry up become a adult.
when i think to childhood my childhood miss me. i want to back to the childhood.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Michelle!
I feel the same. I miss my childhood and I miss being a child without any worries. When we were [이름], we thought being an adult was a good thing, but now we realize that there are a lot of responsibilities and it\'s harder than we thought.
- T. Caitlyn
I miss a lot childhood my friends.
>> I miss my childhood friends a lot.
I ask to my friends hurry up become a adult.
I ask to my friends hurry up become a adult.
>> I ask my friends to hurry up and become adults.
when i think to childhood my childhood miss me.
when i think to childhood my childhood miss me.
When I think about my childhood, I miss it.
i want to back to the childhood.
>> I want to go back to my childhood.
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