Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Teacher Divina,
Happy Tuesday!!!
Thank you for giving me homework
Homework
What happens when a person doesn\'t get enough chance to travel?
My answer
I think I only go on a short trip but I think I will be precious for a short time.
Sometimes, I think short trip can be advantage.
강사 첨삭
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2. Sometimes, I think short trip can be advantage.
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~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think I only go on a short trip but I think I will be precious for a short time.
>>I think I only go on a short trip, but I think it will be precious even for a short time.
2. Sometimes, I think short trip can be advantage.
>>Sometimes, I think short trips can have the advantage.
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