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2012-05-09 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) He quickly reads a book. (quick) 2) Mandy is a pretty girl. (pretty) 3) The class is terribly loud today. (terrible) 4) Max is a good singer. (good) 5) You can easily open this tin. (easy) In our class yesterday, I said I was lonely. Because I missed my mother and I had another reason. A few days ago, I found very cheap travel product on internet. My friends and I, we are saving some money to go on a trip. The saving account will have expired by next month. So I suggested finding it to my friends on this Summer. One of them is new bride to have got married on April. I concerned whether she can go or not. She said to be surely able to go on a trip first but she revised not going together that day afternoon. She can't go on a trip with leaving her husbund and mother-in-law. I wish we go to on a trip this Summer. I couldn't give up it. So I started to find another friends to go on a trip together. Most friends of mine already got married. Others that they don't marry don't have enough time to go on a trip. They have a fixed and short vacation, they will be busy for their work every Summer. To make me most lonely is the fact that I have no friends to go on a trip together.

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Hi Miss. [Name], happy Wednesday! You did an amazing job on your homework..:) And by the way, about your story, maybe you can still find someone who can go along with you for a trip.. Dont loose hope Miss. [Name] okay?:) Anyway, talk to you again later and take care always.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 1) He quickly reads a book. (quick) >>correct2) Mandy is a pretty girl. (pretty) >>correct3) The class is terribly loud today. (terrible) >>correct4) Max is a good singer. (good) >>correct5) You can easily open this tin. (easy)>>correctIn our class yesterday, I said I was lonely. >>correctBecause I missed my mother and I had another reason. >>correctA few days ago, I found very cheap travel product on internet. >>A few days ago, I found a very cheap travel deal on the internet.My friends and I, we are saving some money to go on a trip. >>correct >>My friends and I are saving mpney for a trip.The saving account will have expired by next month. >>The account will expire next month.So I suggested finding it to my friends on this Summer. >>correctOne of them is new bride to have got married on April. >>One of them is a newly wed bride who got married last April.I concerned whether she can go or not. >>Im concerned whether she can go or not.She said to be surely able to go on a trip first but she revised not going together that day afternoon. >>correctShe can\'t go on a trip with leaving her husbund and mother-in-law. >>correctI wish we go to on a trip this Summer. >>I wish we could go on a trip this SUmmer.I couldn\'t give up it. So I started to find another friends to go on a trip together. >>correctMost friends of mine already got married. >>correctOthers that they don\'t marry don\'t have enough time to go on a trip. >>Others who are not yet married dont have enough time to go on a trip.They have a fixed and short vacation, they will be busy for their work every Summer. >>correctTo make me most lonely is the fact that I have no friends to go on a trip together. >>The saddest part is that I have no one to go on a trip.

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