Homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) He quickly reads a book. (quick)
2) Mandy is a pretty girl. (pretty)
3) The class is terribly loud today. (terrible)
4) Max is a good singer. (good)
5) You can easily open this tin. (easy)
In our class yesterday, I said I was lonely.
Because I missed my mother and I had another reason.
A few days ago, I found very cheap travel product on internet.
My friends and I, we are saving some money to go on a trip.
The saving account will have expired by next month.
So I suggested finding it to my friends on this Summer.
One of them is new bride to have got married on April.
I concerned whether she can go or not.
She said to be surely able to go on a trip first but she revised not going together that day afternoon.
She can't go on a trip with leaving her husbund and mother-in-law.
I wish we go to on a trip this Summer.
I couldn't give up it. So I started to find another friends to go on a trip together.
Most friends of mine already got married.
Others that they don't marry don't have enough time to go on a trip.
They have a fixed and short vacation, they will be busy for their work every Summer.
To make me most lonely is the fact that I have no friends to go on a trip together.
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss. [Name], happy Wednesday!
You did an amazing job on your homework..:)
And by the way, about your story, maybe you can still find someone who can go along with you for a trip..
Dont loose hope Miss. [Name] okay?:)
Anyway, talk to you again later and take care always..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
1) He quickly reads a book. (quick)
>>correct2) Mandy is a pretty girl. (pretty)
>>correct3) The class is terribly loud today. (terrible)
>>correct4) Max is a good singer. (good)
>>correct5) You can easily open this tin. (easy)>>correctIn our class yesterday, I said I was lonely.
>>correctBecause I missed my mother and I had another reason.
>>correctA few days ago, I found very cheap travel product on internet.
>>A few days ago, I found a very cheap travel deal on the internet.My friends and I, we are saving some money to go on a trip.
>>correct
>>My friends and I are saving mpney for a trip.The saving account will have expired by next month.
>>The account will expire next month.So I suggested finding it to my friends on this Summer.
>>correctOne of them is new bride to have got married on April.
>>One of them is a newly wed bride who got married last April.I concerned whether she can go or not.
>>Im concerned whether she can go or not.She said to be surely able to go on a trip first but she revised not going together that day afternoon.
>>correctShe can\'t go on a trip with leaving her husbund and mother-in-law.
>>correctI wish we go to on a trip this Summer.
>>I wish we could go on a trip this SUmmer.I couldn\'t give up it. So I started to find another friends to go on a trip together.
>>correctMost friends of mine already got married.
>>correctOthers that they don\'t marry don\'t have enough time to go on a trip.
>>Others who are not yet married dont have enough time to go on a trip.They have a fixed and short vacation, they will be busy for their work every Summer.
>>correctTo make me most lonely is the fact that I have no friends to go on a trip together.
>>The saddest part is that I have no one to go on a trip.
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