Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: What advice can you give someone facing so many life challenges?
A: I think I can advise to be calm, and do those one by one.
If a person encounters so many challenges, he easily get panicked, but he should be calm to go through them all.
Also, if one tries to solve a lot of problems at once, he can get tired and give up.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
It sounds like you’ve been thinking about how to manage life\'s challenges in a calm and thoughtful way. This is an important perspective! Thank you for taking your time.
~ Teacher Trixia
HOMEWORK:
I think I can advise to be calm, and do those one by one.
- CORRECT.
- CORRECT.
>> I think my advice would be to stay calm and tackle them one by one.
If a person encounters so many challenges, he easily get panicked, but he should be calm to go through them all.
If a person encounters so many challenges, he easily get panicked, but he should be calm to go through them all.
- If a person faces many challenges, they may easily panic, but they should remain calm in order to overcome them.
Also, if one tries to solve a lot of problems at once, he can get tired and give up.
Also, if one tries to solve a lot of problems at once, he can get tired and give up.
- CORRECT.
>> Additionally, if someone tries to solve too many problems at once, they might become exhausted and give up.
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