Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
There are people who make money from foraging life.
Their representative things are natural mushrooms, ginseng and arrow roots. Some times they killed wild a[이름]als illegally.
Because their behaviors are their main souses of income.
They know a lot of knowledge about foraging things.
They can distinguish which thing can eat or not.
I think foraging can be their hobby or job.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]ny!
I am glad that you understand the homework today. It sounds exciting to forage food however, if it becomes for a living, I understand the difficulty of it. I saw a video of this and it does look fun but in reality, people who do this every day are wishing and going for a better way of life.
See you!
Aki~
There are people who make money from foraging life.
>>> There are people who make money from foraging.
>>> Some people make money from foraging.
Their representative things are natural mushrooms, ginseng and arrow roots.
>>> Their representative things are natural mushrooms, ginseng, and arrowroots.
Some times they killed wild a[이름]als illegally.
>>> Sometimes they kill wild a[이름]als illegally.
Because their behaviors are their main souses of income.
>>> Because these activities are their main sources of income.
They know a lot of knowledge about foraging things.
>>> They have a lot of knowledge about foraging.
They can distinguish which thing can eat or not.
>>> They can distinguish which can be eaten or not.
>>> They can distinguish which is edible or not.
I think foraging can be their hobby or job.
>> CORRECT!
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