homework
학생이 쓴 원문
"Thank you for your effort to bring me up well. I am sorry because I am often angry at you."
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!!! Greet your parents a happy parents day celebration for me ^^. Thank you for doing your homework, I hope you are sincere with your answer kkk. You are a very nice kid so I think you have good parents because good parents raise good children. Don\'t forget to say \"Saranghe\" to your mom and dad. ^^ Talk to you later (c\'\'.)
~t.Karen ^._.^
\"Thank you for your effort to bring me up well. I am sorry because I am often angry at you.\"
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\"Thank you for your effort to raise me up well. I am sorry because I am often angry at you.\"
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