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Q: How important is the menu when running a cafe?
A: I think it\'s one of the most important things when running a cafe.
If a cafe makes beverages well, but people don\'t really want it, there wouldn\'t be enough demand, and it would be hard to earn money.
Also, there would be a trend, and if a cafe follows the trend, there would be more demand temporarily.
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Hello, [이름]!
If a cafe makes beverages well, but people don\'t really want it, there wouldn\'t be enough demand, and it would be hard to earn money.
I really like your response—it shows that you\'re thinking deeply about what makes a cafe successful!
~ Teacher Trixia
CONTENT:
I think it\'s one of the most important things when running a cafe.
- CORRECT.
>>> OR: I think the menu is one of the most important aspects of running a cafe.
- CORRECT.
>>> OR: If a cafe makes beverages well, but people don\'t really want them, there wouldn\'t be enough demand, and it would be hard to make money.
Also, there would be a trend, and if a cafe follows the trend, there would be more demand temporarily.- CORRECT.
>>> OR: Also, trends can influence demand, and if a cafe follows a trend, it might see a temporary increase in customers.
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