Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Teacher, Divina.
Happy Thursday
Thank you for giving me homework.
Homework
If you could learn one art skill, what would it be and why?
My answer
If I could learn one art skill, I want to learn a way that I sing a song.
It\'s because I want to sing well, and I also want to feel singer\'s emotion.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to consider:
1. If I could learn one art skill, I want to learn a way that I sing a song.
>>If I could learn one art skill, I want to learn how to sing a song.
2. It\'s because I want to sing well, and I also want to feel singer\'s emotion.
>>It\'s because I want to sing well, and I also want to feel the singer\'s emotion.
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