Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: What illegal drugs should be legal?
A: I think there are no illegal drugs that should be legal.
I think illegal drugs are illegal because people can be addicted to those very easily, and it also harms people\'s health a lot.
If those are legal, I think the society will be collapsed.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this topic. Your point about society collapsing if they were legalized is a strong one and highlights the risks involved. Great work!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this topic. Your point about society collapsing if they were legalized is a strong one and highlights the risks involved. Great work!
~ Teacher Trixia
CONTENT:
I think there are no illegal drugs that should be legal.
- I believe no illegal drugs should be made legal.
I think illegal drugs are illegal because people can be addicted to those very easily, and it also harms people\'s health a lot.- I think illegal drugs are prohibited because they are highly addictive and severely harm people\'s health.
If those are legal, I think the society will be collapsed.- If they were legalized, I believe society would collapse.
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