Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If I had a million dollars. I will go to travel the world.
If you need helf.I asked to someone.
I was hungry. So I brought some foods.
If the weather is nice. When l going to picnic. So I am happy is it.
The movie was boring. So I fell as[이름]p.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Michelle!
Great job with your homework. Just take note of a few grammar corrections, but when it comes to the use of \'if\' and \'so,\' you did well! I hope this homework helped you understand it better!
- T. Caitlyn
If I had a million dollars. I will go to travel the world.
>> If I had a million dollars, I would travel the world.
If you need helf.I asked to someone.
If you need helf.I asked to someone.
>> If you need help, I will ask someone.
I was hungry. So I brought some foods.
I was hungry. So I brought some foods.
>> I was hungry, so I brought some food.
If the weather is nice. When l going to picnic. So I am happy is it.
If the weather is nice. When l going to picnic. So I am happy is it.
>> If the weather is nice, then I will go on a picnic so I can be happy.
The movie was boring, so I fell as[이름]p.
The movie was boring, so I fell as[이름]p.
>> CORRECT
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