Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Teacher Divina
Thank you for giving me homework.
Homework
What makes Canada a good place to live for immigrants?
My answer
I think Canada continues to develop for immigrants.
So, this year can have visa 2 years in Canada
Vancouver is colled nature\'s city and I heard Canadian\'s character have good and cool.
So I think many immigrants are going to Canada.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. Have a safe travel!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to consider:
1. Vancouver is colled nature\'s city and I heard Canadian\'s character have good and cool.
>>Vancouver is called nature\'s city, and I heard that Canadian\'s characters are good and cool.
2. So I think many immigrants are going to Canada.
>>So, I think many immigrants want to go to Canada.
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