Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: Do you think social activities are more important for children or adults? Why?
A: I think social activities are more important for children.
Social activities can make children know how to interact with others and more about the relationship with others in society.
But still, I think social activities are also important for adults because people can\'t live alone.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Great effort! You’ve explained your opinion well. Work on refining sentence flow and word choice to make your ideas even clearer.
~ Teacher Trixia
CONTENT:
I think social activities are more important for children.
- I think social activities are more important for children.
Social activities can make children know how to interact with others and more about the relationship with others in society.- Social activities help children learn how to interact with others and understand relationships in society.
But still, I think social activities are also important for adults because people can\'t live alone.- However, I think social activities are also important for adults because people can’t live alone.
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