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I heard about Philippinos characters from my husband and you.
So I felt friendly feeling to Philippines .
They were positive and bright, especially merchants were more kind than I expected.
I wonder their kindness is only to foreigners as Koreans do.
Every food was good .they didn\'t use much spice to the dishes.
But every alley was not convenient to pass by because they were too narrow and their floor didn\'t cover with cement.
But Boracay was good place to visit again.
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Good day, Ms, [이름]ny!
The Philippines is known for its great hospitality ( the friendly and generous reception and entertainment of guests, visitors, or strangers). Regardless of your nationality, it has been a culture to show friendliness to everyone. But a lot of people mi[이름]derstood this, and that became a drawback to us Filipinos.
Thank you for this!
Aki~
I heard about Philippinos characters from my husband and you.
>>> I heard a lot of things about the Filipino characteristics from my husband and you.
So I felt friendly feeling to Philippines.
>> So I felt comfortable in the Philippines.
They were positive and bright, especially merchants were more kind than I expected.
>>>They were positive and bright, especially the merchants were kinder than I expected.
I wonder their kindness is only to foreigners as Koreans do.
>>> I wonder if their kindness is only to foreigners like Koreans do.
>>> I wonder if their kindness is only to foreigners like us.
Every food was good .they didn\'t use much spice to the dishes.
>>> Every food was good, they didn\'t use much spice in the dishes.
But every alley was not convenient to pass by because they were too narrow and their floor didn\'t cover with cement.
>>>But every alley was not convenient to pass by because they were too narrow and the ground wasn\'t covered with cement.
But Boracay was good place to visit again.
>>> But Boracay was a good place to visit again.
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