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2025-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Trixia

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Q: Where and how would you prefer to meet new people? A: For now, I just want to meet new people in school. I don\'t actually like meeting new people, but I can\'t live alone, so I want to meet my peers with common interests. I want them to be peers because it would be easier to have comon interests.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!
You missed our class today. I hope you\'re well. :)

Good job sharing your preferences! Work on consistent phrasing and word choice for clarity. Keep practicing! 

See you on Monday! ^^
~ Teacher Trixia

CONTENT:
For now, I just want to meet new people in school.
- For now, I only want to meet new people at school. 
I don\'t actually like meeting new people, but I can\'t live alone, so I want to meet my peers with common interests.
- I don’t really like meeting new people, but I can’t live alone, so I want to meet peers who share common interests. 
I want them to be peers because it would be easier to have comon interests.
- I prefer peers because it would be easier to share common interests.

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