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I too much depend on my family.
I feel like stupid for my life because I want to learning English.
I don’t want to depend on my family.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Michelle!
I hope that learning English can make you more independent, especially since you are living in America. Also, I don’t think you are stupid. You are doing well and putting in a lot of effort, so I really admire you for that!
- T. Caitlyn
I too much depend on my family.
>> I depend too much on my family.
I feel like stupid for my life because I want to learning English.
I feel like stupid for my life because I want to learning English.
>> I feel stupid about my life, so I want to learn English.
I don’t want to depend on my family.
I don’t want to depend on my family.
>> CORRECT
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