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2012-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) This is [Name]'s book. 2) Let's go to the Smiths'. (Smiths) 3) The children's room is upstairs. (children) 4) John's sister is twelve years old. (John) 5) Susan's and Steve's bags have blue stickers. (Susan - Steve) I saw my travel photo on my cyworld.(cyworld is like blog) My last updating is 2 years ago. I didn't manage my cyworld for a long time. I logged in it to see my friend's Europe travel photo and I saw my photo album. My last photo is Singapore travel. It looks like young and thin than now. I looked me in the glass. There is a old woman in the glass. I have been getting more wrinkles on my face. And I have gained two much weight in my midsection. I need on a diet and skin care to block being old. I will skip my dinner today and do a face pack every night. Thesedays, I get ond sad thing every day.

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Hello my dear Miss. [Name], thank you for doing a great job in making your homework..:) I understand what you feel Miss. [Name], coz I feel the same way.. Nowdys i feel so insecure because I now that Im getting older..and older!!:( There are a lot of ways to block aging but I guess happiness in life is the best way,.Why don\'t we try that Miss. [Name]?:DAnyway, talk to you again later my dear.. xoxoTeacher Cam 1) This is [Name]\'s book. >>correct2) Let\'s go to the Smiths\'. (Smiths) >>correct3) The children\'s room is upstairs. (children) >>correct4) John\'s sister is twelve years old. (John) >>correct5) Susan\'s and Steve\'s bags have blue stickers. (Susan - Steve)>>correctI saw my travel photo on my cyworld.(cyworld is like blog) >>correctMy last updating is 2 years ago. >>My last update was 2 years ago.I didn\'t manage my cyworld for a long time. >>correctI logged in it to see my friend\'s Europe travel photo and I saw my photo album. >>correctMy last photo is Singapore travel. >>correctIt looks like young and thin than now. >>I looked young and thin in those pictures compared to now.I looked me in the glass. >>I looked in the mirror.There is a old woman in the glass. >>There is an old woman in the mirror.I have been getting more wrinkles on my face. And I have gained two much weight in my midsection. >>correctI need on a diet and skin care to block being old. >>I need to go ona diet and use skin care to block aging.I will skip my dinner today and do a face pack every night. >>correctThesedays, I get ond sad thing every day. >>These days, I get to know one thing that make me feel sad.

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