Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I totally admit the effect of herbal plants.
Their effect shows up late but it\\\'s effect last for a long time.
I saw many customers who were treated their diseases from herbal plants when I worked at the Chinese medical store.
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K indness,bright and detailed education are her characteristics.
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강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms [이름]ny!
I am glad that it\'s my birthday or I couldn\'t figure out that you have a \"poetic side\"
Thank you for this and for diligently writing your homework. Yes, I will enjoy my day. haha
Aki~
I totally admit the effect of herbal plants.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> I admit that herbal plants have a great effect.
Their effect shows up late but it\\\'s effect last for a long time.
>>> Their effectivity might be late but it lasts for a long time.
I saw many customers who were treated their diseases from herbal plants when I worked at the Chinese medical store.
>>> I saw many customers who got treated for their diseases from herbal plants when I worked at the Chinese medical store.
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