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I think a crime is still a crime. So by the way, even if a crime’s purpose is reasonable, a crime isn’t reasonable itself. But I suggest that the law can be less applicable for good reason.
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I think a crime is still a crime.
Correct, or
>>A crime’s a crime, no matter the reason behind it.
So by the way, even if a crime’s purpose is reasonable, a crime isn’t reasonable itself.
>>By the way, even if the crime’s purpose is reasonable, the crime itself is not reasonable.
OR
>> Even though the motive behind the crime may be justifiable, the act itself remains inherently unjustifiable.
But I suggest that the law can be less applicable for good reason.
>>But I suggest that the law could be less applicable in cases with good reason.
OR
>>However, I would advocate for a more lenient interpretation of the law in instances where there is a compelling justification.
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