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2025-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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I can’t speak English. I want to speak English well Why-I want to good conversations with my grandson and go to college two years later. I have a lot of bad at but I want to change the most.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Michelle!

I support you in the changes you want to achieve. I know with your hard work and passion, you can do it!

- T. Caitlyn

I can’t speak English.

>> CORRECT
I want to speak English well

>> CORRECT
Why-I want to good conversations with my grandson and go to college two years later.

>> Why? Because I want to have good conversations with my grandson and go to college in two years.
I have a lot of bad at but I want to change the most.

>> I have many things I’m bad at, but I want to change the most.

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