Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I am suitable a kind of job which I organize someone\'s schedule like secretary.
If I were a high-school student I would have majored in computer.
I can manage the time effectively and I am reliable person.
But most of all I want to be a travelling guide.
Because I like to travel and I am interested in history of world history.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ms. [이름]ny!
Did you know that some people get jobs based on their personality rather than their major?
I have seen a lot of people working which is different from their major. Do you think you are one of them?
T. Aki~
I think I am suitable a kind of job which I organize someone\'s schedule like secretary.
>>> I think I am suitable for a kind of job in which I organize someone\'s schedule like a secretary.
If I were a high-school student I would have majored in computer.
>>> CORRECT!
I can manage the time effectively and I am reliable person.
>>> I can manage my time effectively and I am a reliable person.
But most of all I want to be a travelling guide.
>>> But most of all I want to be a traveling guide.
>>> But most of all I want to be a tour guide.
Because I like to travel and I am interested in history of world history.
>>> because I like to travel and I am interested in the history of world history.
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