Homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY: For school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Until a child grows up to be a full-fledged adult, we learn many things at school. They range from small things like math and language to big things like philosophy and how to live life.
Also, school is a small society. We learn society while attending school. This shows that we learn more at school than at home.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Lee! Mondays have a way of feeling heavy. The weekend feels like it was just a blink ago, and the week ahead can seem overwhelming. But remember, Monday is not the enemy. It’s a fresh start, an opportunity to reset, refocus, and begin again!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Until a child grows up to be a full-fledged adult, we learn many things at school.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
They range from small things like math and language to big things like philosophy and how to live life.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Also, school is a small society.
Also, school is a small society.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
We learn in society while attending school.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
This shows that we learn more at school than at home.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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