homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are the environmental problems in your community? Can you share some ideas on how to solve them?
I think the environmental problem in my community is street trash.
My solution is to get more fines for dumping trash.
Then people won\'t throw away trash because they are scared.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jessica!
Thank you for doing your homework!
Nice job! ^^ Your answer is clear, and you’ve shared a good idea! Do check the corrections, just for a few small improvements for clarity.
Please continue doing your homework in order to improve your writing skills as well! :)
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
I think the environmental problem in my community is street trash.
- CORRECT.
My solution is to get more fines for dumping trash.
- My solution is to increase the fines for dumping trash.
Then people won\'t throw away trash because they are scared.
- Then people won\'t throw trash away because they will be afraid of the fines.
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