homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are the advantages and disadvantages of social media?
I think the good thing of social media is that we can easily interact with others.
I think it provides a good opportunity to contact people who are far away, even strangers.
The disadvantage is that it has become easier to compare ourselves with others.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jessica!
Happy Thursday! You\'ve been doing great :) Please don\'t lose hope in becoming fluent in English. ^^
This time, your ideas are great, and check these minor changes to make it sound more polished!
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
I think the good thing of social media is that we can easily interact with others.
- I think the advantage of social media is that we can easily interact with others.
I think it provides a good opportunity to contact people who are far away, even strangers.
- It provides a good opportunity to connect with people who are far away, even strangers.
The disadvantage is that it has become easier to compare ourselves with others.
- The disadvantage is that it has become easier to compare ourselves with others.
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