homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
2012.05.11
1) (a glass) milk - a glass of milk
2) (my friend) bike - my friend's bike
3) (the window) room - the window of room
4) (Mr. [Name]) car - Mr. [Name]'s car
5) (ten minutes) walk - ten minutes of walk
I was busy all day bacause I helped my friend's mother to buy somethings in the internet duty free shop.
She will go on a trip to Canada next week.
She will stay there 3 days and she will go to America to meet her sun.
So she need some presents to give him.
And she wants to buy some health foods for herself.
There are 5 duty free shops.
I have to plan which of duty free shops to use, what to buy.
And I calculated the price applied coupon and accumulated money all day.
It's easy to get the accumulated money.
When I just log in it, I will get some money.
And the various cooperative firms like credit card company give users to vist their homepage some money.
I feel great joy when I bought something very cheap.
So I'll help anyone to use duty free shop.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name], its a TGI Friday agian!YEAH!!
And thank you for making your homework..
By the way, it\'s good to know that you are feeling very happy whenever you buy cheap things..We have to save money right Miss. [Name]?kkk
Talk to you again later my dear..
xoxo Teacher Cam
1) (a glass) milk - a glass of milk
>>correct2) (my friend) bike - my friend\'s bike
>>correct3) (the window) room - the window of room
>>window of the room4) (Mr. [Name]) car - Mr. [Name]\'s car
>>correct5) (ten minutes) walk - ten minutes of walk>>correct
>>ten minutes\' walkI was busy all day bacause I helped my friend\'s mother to buy somethings in the internet duty free shop.
>>correct..some thingsShe will go on a trip to Canada next week.
>>correctShe will stay there 3 days and she will go to America to meet her sun.
>>She will stay there for 3 days and she will go to America to meet her son.So she need some presents to give him.
>>So she needs to buy some prsents for him.And she wants to buy some health foods for herself.
>>She also wants to buy some healthy foods for herself.There are 5 duty free shops.
>>correctI have to plan which of duty free shops to use, what to buy.>>I have to plan which duty free shop to use and the things to buy.
And I calculated the price applied coupon and accumulated money all day.
>>correctIt\'s easy to get the accumulated money.
>>correctWhen I just log in it, I will get some money.
>>I can accumulate money by merely logging into my account.And the various cooperative firms like credit card company give users to vist their homepage some money.
>>various cooperatives like credit card companies give their users privilege to get some money whenever they visit their homepage.I feel great joy when I bought something very cheap.
>>I feel great joy whenever I buy something very cheap.So I\'ll help anyone to use duty free shop.
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