Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t think the homework of the presentation is helping me a lot to improve of my English.
Of cause it gives me confidence, but it is helpful only to office workers.
It takes a lot of time to complete the presentation.
I only like making sentences with English like an essay.
Essay is enough for me to improve my English.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ms. [Name]!
Didn\'t you know that presentation is the \"illustrated form of essay\"? What I love about the presentation is that people\'s focus is not 100% on you but on your illustrations. That gives you a chance to skip a little from being nervous. Enjoy the moment :)
Aki~
I don\'t think the homework of the presentation is helping me a lot to improve of my English.
>>> I don\'t think the homework for the presentation is helping me a lot to improve my English.
Of cause it gives me confidence, but it is helpful only to office workers.
>>> Of course it gives me confidence, but it is helpful only to office workers.
It takes a lot of time to complete the presentation.
>>> CORRECT!
I only like making sentences with English like an essay.
>>> I only like making sentences in English like an essay.
Essay is enough for me to improve my English.
>>> An essay is enough for me to improve my English.
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