Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I’m aiming at studying English to go to the college.
2. This year I’m aiming at exercising for my heath.
3.I’m aiming at traveling with my husband.
4.I’m aiming at meeting my childhood friend. And go to the cruise trip together for Alaska.
5. We threw the bell aiming at shooting and into the basket.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Michelle!
I know it\'s quite confusing to use \'aiming at\' in sentences. Just remember, \'aiming at\' refers to a target or goal and is usually followed by a noun. \'Aiming to,\' on the other hand, refers to a plan or action and is usually followed by a verb. Let\'s discuss more in class later.
- T. Caitlyn
1. I’m aiming at studying English to go to the college.
>> I’m aiming at improving my English by going to college.
2. This year I’m aiming at exercising for my heath.
2. This year I’m aiming at exercising for my heath.
>> This year, I’m aiming at becoming healthier by exercising.
3.I’m aiming at traveling with my husband.
3.I’m aiming at traveling with my husband.
>> I’m aiming at a trip with my husband.
4.I’m aiming at meeting my childhood friend. And go to the cruise trip together for Alaska.
4.I’m aiming at meeting my childhood friend. And go to the cruise trip together for Alaska.
>> I’m aiming at having a reunion with my childhood friend and taking a cruise trip to Alaska together.
5. We threw the bell aiming at shooting and into the basket.
5. We threw the bell aiming at shooting and into the basket.
>> We threw the ball aiming at the basket.
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