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Hello jewel🤗
I attatched my file.
The time finishing work is remainning about 2 hours.
I want to go home and sleep.
I’m feeling today is too long.
I always thank you for your help.
Have a nice day.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Stella! Learning to keep time commitments is an important life skill, and it’s great that he’s starting to understand it. With consistency and experience, he’ll develop a strong sense of responsibility over time. Keep guiding him—you\'re doing a great job!
~T. Jewel
I have many things what I teach and coach for him.
>>I have many things to teach and coach him on.
But I’m not trying to do much.
>>But I try not to do too much
Because It might bad effect to a child rather than do less.
>>Because doing too much might have a worse effect on a child than doing less.
Anyway, these days, I have one thing that I think more important than others.
Anyway, these days, I have one thing that I think more important than others.
>>Anyway, these days, there is one thing that I think is more important than others.
So, I’m pushing him to keep time promise, like starting time of classes or taking academy bus.
So, I’m pushing him to keep time promise, like starting time of classes or taking academy bus.
>>So, I’m pushing him to keep his time commitments, like being on time for classes or taking the academy bus.
Because, it’s been very important work and also will be equal in his future after becoming a adult.
Because, it’s been very important work and also will be equal in his future after becoming a adult.
>>Because it is very important now and will continue to be in his future when he becomes an adult.
But he couldn’t understand what I said and he didn’t agree with my opinion.
>>But he couldn’t understand what I said and didn’t agree with my opinion
Even though he said that it was right for the bus to wait him.
>>He even said that it was right for the bus to wait for him.
I thought the situation was not good for him.
>>I felt that the situation was not good for him.
I gave a disadvantage for my son when he used his phone.
>>I set a restriction for my son when he used his phone.
Also, It happened some event.
Also, It happened some event.
>>It also happened during another event.
The car left for the academy without my son.
>>The car left for the academy without him.
After this event, I told him that all students who was on the bus couldn’t late for the class due to wait for you.
After this event, I told him that all students who was on the bus couldn’t late for the class due to wait for you.
>>After this event, I told him that all the students on the bus couldn’t be late for class because they had to wait for him.
He is changing his mind. But I think he still learn keeping time promises.
He is changing his mind. But I think he still learn keeping time promises.
>>He is starting to change his mind, but I think he still needs to learn the importance of keeping time commitments.
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