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Question: What did you learn from our lesson about \'Should parents scold their children for bad grades?\'
Answer: Parent must not scold children for bad grades. Because Students will lose confidence.
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Hi, [이름]!
I totally agree with you. Parents should never scold their children for bad grades as it is a negative method of disciplining their child and it can have negative impact on their self-esteem.
I totally agree with you. Parents should never scold their children for bad grades as it is a negative method of disciplining their child and it can have negative impact on their self-esteem.
Parent must not scold children for bad grades.
>> Parents must not scold their children for bad grades.
Because Students will lose confidence.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Because students will lose confidence.
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