Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.My husband laughing at my joke.
2.I was laughing at our old watching video.
3.I was laughing at myself when I did my bad makeup.
4. They are laughing at the [이름] boy . Because he dancing so cute.
5. I was walking when I felt.I was so embarrassed. Because the people laughing at me.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Michelle!
Great effort! Just be mindful of verb forms and sentence structure. Make sure each sentence has a complete verb like ‘is laughing’ instead of just ‘laughing’. Also, avoid placing a period before \'because\' since it\'s part of the same sentence. Keep practicing—you’re improving!
- T. Caitlyn
1.My husband laughing at my joke.
>> My husband is laughing at my joke.
2.I was laughing at our old watching video.
2.I was laughing at our old watching video.
>> I was laughing at our old video.
3.I was laughing at myself when I did my bad makeup.
>> I was laughing at myself because of my bad makeup.
4. They are laughing at the [이름] boy . Because he dancing so cute.
4. They are laughing at the [이름] boy . Because he dancing so cute.
>> They are laughing at the [이름] boy because he is dancing so cutely.
5. I was walking when I felt.I was so embarrassed. Because the people laughing at me.
5. I was walking when I felt.I was so embarrassed. Because the people laughing at me.
>> I was walking when I fell. I was so embarrassed because people were laughing at me.
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