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People need friends because they feel lonely without friends. We can share good memories with our friends and learn a lot of things from them. In childhood, we need to learn to be considerate. If a person has no friends, that person will grow up to selfish-person. I feel deeply a necessity of friends nowdays. Because I work with my friends in laboratory. We rely on each other in unfamiliar place. For example, our assistant gave a work to us. My friends remembered some information about experiment which I missed. We filled up each weakness. When we were blue, we could talk about funny things to make our feeling better.
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A student who tries their very best is the optimal type of student. I actively see this personality trait in you. This is precisely what I like to see in students, and I know you\'re committed to improvement and growth.
T. Jeny
>>correct
We can share good memories with our friends and learn a lot of things from them.
>>correct
In childhood, we need to learn to be considerate.
>>correct
If a person has no friends, that person will grow up to selfish-person.
>>If a person has no friends, that person will grow up to be a selfish person.
I feel deeply a necessity of friends nowdays.
>> I feel a deep necessity for friends nowadays.
Because I work with my friends in laboratory.
>>Because I work with my friends in the laboratory.
We rely on each other in unfamiliar place.
>>We rely on each other in unfamiliar places.
For example, our assistant gave a work to us.
>>For example, our assistant gave us some work to do.
My friends remembered some information about experiment which I missed.
>>My friends will remember some information about the experiment which I missed.
We filled up each weakness.
>>We fill up each other\'s weaknesses.
When we were blue, we could talk about funny things to make our feeling better.
>>When we are blue, we can talk about funny things to make our feelings better.
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