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I could go back to my childhood I want to become a fashion designer because I love making clothes.
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Hello again, Michelle!
Wow! That was also my dream when I was [이름] because I also liked designing clothes. Hopefully, even if you cannot go back to your childhood, there is still a way to pursue what you want.
- T. Caitlyn
I could go back to my childhood I want to become a fashion designer because I love making clothes.
>> If I could go back to my childhood, I would want to become a fashion designer because I love making clothes.
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