homework
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I believe that love can influence people because get love people are leisurely figure. person\'s brain is excited when they fall in love. people learn lots of emotion when they fall in love.
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Although, love could also be in a lot of forms of relationships like family and friends. I hope you had a wonderful Valentine\'s Day. <3 See you in class. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I believe that love can influence people because get love people are leisurely figure.
>> I believe that love can influence people because being loved by other people is a privilege.
person\'s brain is excited when they fall in love.
>> A person\'s brain gets excited when they fall in love.
people learn lots of emotion when they fall in love.
>> People discover a lot of emotions when they are in love.
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