homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I tried memorizing words every day for improve my English skill. I chose my goal for moving forward. I focus on my life without my cellphone. I will try much kind of ways for moving forword.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Na [이름]. I appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts on the homework topic. I think everyone wants to improve themselves to be able to move forward. I\'m glad you\'re trying to make an effort to do so even in studying the English language. Have a wonderful rest of the day. See you in class. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I tried memorizing words every day for improve my English skill.
>> I tried memorizing words every day to improve my English skills.
I chose my goal for moving forward.
>> I chose my goal for moving forward.
I focus on my life without my cellphone.
>> I focus on my life without spending much time on my cellphone.
I will try much kind of ways for moving forward.
>> I will try many ways to move forward.
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