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학생이 쓴 원문
I went to see ([이름] moon se) he is a(an) old singer’s and sings well.
I listened to a lot when I was [이름].
When I listen to his song I remember the my childhood.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Michelle!
Thank you for sharing with me the singer you wanted to see in a concert. I agree with you. Hearing songs from our childhood is really nice; it makes us reminisce and gives us a feeling of nostalgia.
- T. Caitlyn
I went to see ([이름] moon se)
>> I want to see [이름] Moon Se.
he is a(an) old singer’s and sings well.
>> He is an old singer and sings well.
I listened to a lot when I was [이름].
I listened to a lot when I was [이름].
>> I listened to a lot of his songs when I was [이름].
When I listen to his song I remember the my childhood.
When I listen to his song I remember the my childhood.
>> When I listen to his songs, I remember my childhood.
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