homework
학생이 쓴 원문
when I see a photogragh, I see a photogragh only look at it. I feel bored when I see a photograph deep. I see a photograph then I don\'t think anythings because I fall out this scene.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Na [이름]. Thank you for your honest opinion on the topic. :) I guess there are only a few people who are interested in looking deeply and meticulously at photographs. Maybe we\'ll get a chance to talk about photographs in our class. I hope you\'re having a good day. I\'ll see you in class later. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
when I see a photogragh, I see a photogragh only look at it.
>> Whenever I see a photograph I only look at it.
I feel bored when I see a photograph deep.
>> I feel bored when I look at it deeply.
I see a photograph then I don\'t think anythings because I fall out this scene.
>> When I see a photograph I don\'t think anything different about it and I forget about it.
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