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I think that changing the world of an idea is not special. so I can think of an idea that changed the world. if an idea make people happier, It\'s an idea that changed the world.
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I think that changing the world of an idea is not special. so I can
think of an idea that changed the world. if an idea make people happier,
It\'s an idea that changed the world.
>> I think that changing the world with idea is not special. I
think an idea can change the world. If an idea makes people happy,
It\'s an idea that can change the world.
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