homework
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If I think of a new idea, I think mini heater. during winter, I thought winter weakness. It\'s so cold that it is winter weakness.
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Hey there, Na [이름]. I\'m happy to read your thoughts on the homework topic. I think it\'s a great idea especially if it would help get over winter weaknesses :) Maybe someday someone would come up with something similar. Once again, I appreciate you looking into the homework and expressing your thoughts about it. Have a good night! ~Teacher Jane c\",)
If I think of a new idea, I think mini heater.
>> If I think of a new idea for an invention it would be a mini heater.
during winter, I thought winter weakness.
>> During winter I think of winter weakness.
It\'s so cold that it is winter weakness.
>> OR: It\'s so cold and we call it winter weakness.
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