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2025-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Actually, I’m satisfied with the environment of our generation. But if I had to choose a period in history to go back to, I would pick the 1980s–1990s because I want to experience my parents\' era. If I could go back to that time, I would be around the same age as my father and mother. We could share our music playlists and our emotions and thoughts while watching the same movies and dramas together. I also want to experience life without cellphones. Back then, there were no smartphones, so people had to ask for directions in person. Also, people had \"jeong\", which means a deep sense of kindness and connection with others. I’d love to experience romance in that era.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Determination and perseverance move the world; thinking that others will do it for you is a sure way to fail. Determination is one of the key factors of improving your ability to speak and understand a conversation. In your case I know that you are determined to improve your skills in English.

T. Jeny  


Actually, I’m satisfied with the environment of our generation. 
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But if I had to choose a period in history to go back to, I would pick the 1980s-1990s because I want to experience my parents\' era.
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If I could go back to that time, I would be around the same age as my father and mother. 
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We could share our music playlists and our emotions and thoughts while watching the same movies and dramas together.
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I also want to experience life without cellphones. 
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Back then, there were no smartphones, so people had to ask for directions in person. 
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Also, people had \"jeong\", which means a deep sense of kindness and connection with others. 
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I’d love to experience romance in that era.
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