homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I’m satisfied with the environment of our generation. But if I had to choose a period in history to go back to, I would pick the 1980s–1990s because I want to experience my parents\' era.
If I could go back to that time, I would be around the same age as my father and mother. We could share our music playlists and our emotions and thoughts while watching the same movies and dramas together.
I also want to experience life without cellphones. Back then, there were no smartphones, so people had to ask for directions in person. Also, people had \"jeong\", which means a deep sense of kindness and connection with others. I’d love to experience romance in that era.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Determination and perseverance move the world; thinking that others will do it for you is a sure way to fail. Determination is one of the key factors of improving your ability to speak and understand a conversation. In your case I know that you are determined to improve your skills in English.
T. Jeny
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But if I had to choose a period in history to go back to, I would pick the 1980s-1990s because I want to experience my parents\' era.
But if I had to choose a period in history to go back to, I would pick the 1980s-1990s because I want to experience my parents\' era.
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If I could go back to that time, I would be around the same age as my father and mother.
If I could go back to that time, I would be around the same age as my father and mother.
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We could share our music playlists and our emotions and thoughts while watching the same movies and dramas together.
We could share our music playlists and our emotions and thoughts while watching the same movies and dramas together.
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I also want to experience life without cellphones.
I also want to experience life without cellphones.
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Back then, there were no smartphones, so people had to ask for directions in person.
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Also, people had \"jeong\", which means a deep sense of kindness and connection with others.
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I’d love to experience romance in that era.
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