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My mom always told to be careful .
When I heard bad things after reading my
Saju.I think a lot peoples still my mom similar thing.
My opinion is when I hear bad thing.
I\'m careful ti but I don\'t think very important.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Michelle!
Actually, this is the reason why I\'m scared of fortunetelling. When I hear bad things, I might constantly worry about them, and it could affect me greatly.
- T. Caitlyn
My mom always told to be careful .When I heard bad things after reading my Saju.
>> My mom always told me to be careful after reading my Saju.
I think a lot peoples still my mom similar thing.
>> A lot of people from my mom\'s generation believe in Saju.
My opinion is when I hear bad thing. I\'m careful ti but I don\'t think very important.
My opinion is when I hear bad thing. I\'m careful ti but I don\'t think very important.
>> In my opinion, when I hear bad things, I become careful, but I don\'t think about it too much.
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