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학생이 쓴 원문
I think knowing many things more important. Because I think that I should know many things. so, I will learn many things.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Na [이름]. I\'m happy to see your progress in English and your writing skills. I\'m glad you have an open mind to learn many things in the future. Keep learning and keep improving. I\'m so proud of you. Enjoy the rest of your evening. ~Teacher Jane :)
I think knowing many things more important.
>> I think knowing many things is more important.
Because I think that I should know many things.
>> I think I should know many things.
so, I will learn many things.
>> So I\'m going to learn many things.
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