homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I will paint I thinking in the world. The world in my thought is warm,friendly and careful but sometimes cold,haertlessing and parece. I want to express in my paint.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Na [이름]. Thank you for trying to keep up with the homework. I appreciate your hard work. Continue to check on your spelling and the spacing of words before and after punctuation marks. Other than that, you did a great job expressing your thoughts. I hope you\'re having a good rest tonight. See you tomorrow in class. ~Teacher Jane \",
I will paint I thinking in the world.
>> I will paint what I think of the world.
The world in my thought is warm,friendly and careful but sometimes cold,haertlessing and parece.
>> In my mind, the world is warm, friendly, and full of care but sometimes it\'s also cold, heartless, and cruel.
I want to express in my paint.
>> I want to express it in a painting.
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