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This restaurant was popular but it lost [이름]
Customers .
It would have been better if modernized their dishes and design.
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Hello, Michelle!
You are right! These restaurants are popular, but not for the [이름]er generation because most [이름] people prefer new and unique dishes and Instagrammable places. Yes, it would have been nice if they could modernize them, but I also think that would cost a lot of money.
- T. Caitlyn
This restaurant was popular but it lost [이름] Customers .
>> This restaurant was popular, but not to [이름] customers.
It would have been better if modernized their dishes and design.
It would have been better if modernized their dishes and design.
>> It would have been better if they had modernized their dishes and design.
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