homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) This is the boy who had an accident.
2) Yesterday I saw a car which was really old.
3) Mandy is the girl who I met on Friday.
4) I haven't seen Frank, whose brother is five, for a long time now.
5) The robber stole the car which the lady parked in front of the supermarket
I bought the airplane ticket to Bangkok last Saterday.
I will go there at the end of next month.
I have been interested in Thailand but I don't know enough to go there.
It suddenly happened.
Last Saterday, I just searched this and that on the internet.
I found the ticket to Bangkok was sold very cheap by a low cost airline.
I shouted "eureka" and I bought it right.
And I also booked a guest house cheaply.
I was pleased with the ticket and booking.
But today, I knew that The Vaiyoke Sky Hotel which is the most highest in Bangkok is cheaper than my guest house.
That hotel is on promotion now.
I didn't decide wherther to cancel my guest house or not yet.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday Miss. [Name]!
Wow that is a very good news you told me today my dear, I\'m so happy to hear that finally you\'re gonna go on a trip..:)
Anyway, we will talk more about that on our class later..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
1) This is the boy who had an accident.
>>correct2) Yesterday I saw a car which was really old.
>>correct3) Mandy is the girl who I met on Friday.
>>correct4) I haven\'t seen Frank, whose brother is five, for a long time now. >>correct
5) The robber stole the car which the lady parked in front of the supermarket>>correctI bought the airplane ticket to Bangkok last Saterday.
>>correct
>>I bought an airplane ticket to Bangkok last Saturday..Obsereve proper spelling of SATURDAY..:)I will go there at the end of next month.
>>correctI have been interested in Thailand but I don\'t know enough to go there.
>>I have been interested in Thailand but I don\'t know much about this place.It suddenly happened.
>>correctLast Saterday, I just searched this and that on the internet.
>>Last SATURDAY, I just searched on this on the internet.I found the ticket to Bangkok was sold very cheap by a low cost airline.
>>I found a ticket to Bangkok that was sold cheaply at a very low cost airline.I shouted \"eureka\" and I bought it right.
>>correct
>>I shouted eureka and I bought the ticket right away.And I also booked a guest house cheaply.
>>correctI was pleased with the ticket and booking.
>>correctBut today, I knew that The Vaiyoke Sky Hotel which is the most highest in Bangkok is cheaper than my guest house.
>>But today, I knew that the Vaiyoke Sky Hotel which is the highest building in Bangkok is cheaper than my guest house.That hotel is on promotion now.
>>correctI didn\'t decide wherther to cancel my guest house or not yet.
>>I haven\'t decided if I will cancel my reservation in my guest house or not.
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