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2012-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) This is the boy who had an accident. 2) Yesterday I saw a car which was really old. 3) Mandy is the girl who I met on Friday. 4) I haven't seen Frank, whose brother is five, for a long time now. 5) The robber stole the car which the lady parked in front of the supermarket I bought the airplane ticket to Bangkok last Saterday. I will go there at the end of next month. I have been interested in Thailand but I don't know enough to go there. It suddenly happened. Last Saterday, I just searched this and that on the internet. I found the ticket to Bangkok was sold very cheap by a low cost airline. I shouted "eureka" and I bought it right. And I also booked a guest house cheaply. I was pleased with the ticket and booking. But today, I knew that The Vaiyoke Sky Hotel which is the most highest in Bangkok is cheaper than my guest house. That hotel is on promotion now. I didn't decide wherther to cancel my guest house or not yet.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday Miss. [Name]! Wow that is a very good news you told me today my dear, I\'m so happy to hear that finally you\'re gonna go on a trip..:) Anyway, we will talk more about that on our class later.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 1) This is the boy who had an accident. >>correct2) Yesterday I saw a car which was really old. >>correct3) Mandy is the girl who I met on Friday. >>correct4) I haven\'t seen Frank, whose brother is five, for a long time now. >>correct 5) The robber stole the car which the lady parked in front of the supermarket>>correctI bought the airplane ticket to Bangkok last Saterday. >>correct >>I bought an airplane ticket to Bangkok last Saturday..Obsereve proper spelling of SATURDAY..:)I will go there at the end of next month. >>correctI have been interested in Thailand but I don\'t know enough to go there. >>I have been interested in Thailand but I don\'t know much about this place.It suddenly happened. >>correctLast Saterday, I just searched this and that on the internet. >>Last SATURDAY, I just searched on this on the internet.I found the ticket to Bangkok was sold very cheap by a low cost airline. >>I found a ticket to Bangkok that was sold cheaply at a very low cost airline.I shouted \"eureka\" and I bought it right. >>correct >>I shouted eureka and I bought the ticket right away.And I also booked a guest house cheaply. >>correctI was pleased with the ticket and booking. >>correctBut today, I knew that The Vaiyoke Sky Hotel which is the most highest in Bangkok is cheaper than my guest house. >>But today, I knew that the Vaiyoke Sky Hotel which is the highest building in Bangkok is cheaper than my guest house.That hotel is on promotion now. >>correctI didn\'t decide wherther to cancel my guest house or not yet. >>I haven\'t decided if I will cancel my reservation in my guest house or not.

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