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If I could travel soon, I would like to go to Hawaii.
I want to go there because I heard that all my friends have been there.
I felt a bit jealous, so my mom said I can go there during summer vacation.
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If I could travel soon, I would like to go to Hawaii.
>>> correct
I want to go there because I heard that all my friends have been there.>>> correct
>>> OR: I want to go there because I\'ve heard so much about it from all my friends who have been there.
I felt a bit jealous, so my mom said I can go there during summer vacation.
>>> correct
>>> OR: I felt a bit jealous, so my mom said I can go there on my summer vacation.
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